![]() There is very little description of what, where and how of Marchesi family and their business. Lucien sees Peter, bullies him into accepting everything and we have a couple basically by the end of chapter maybe 3 or 4. It started from almost the very beginning. The intimate scenes were hot and s*exy, the villains were great a$$holes, so I liked the danger aspect here.Īnother thing that just stopped me from enjoying this book was that there was no build up to the relationship. It was awkward at times with both MCs saying and not doing. He constantly said I am not brave, I run from danger. I liked him fine but again the author did the same thing with him as she did with Lucien. He was perfectly submissive, perfectly loyal and perfectly ordinary. I half expected him to rip his shirt off and beat his chest while saying that he was in charge over and over again. There was no certain presence or charisma to him, no air that made him feel dangerous as the author no doubt intended him to be. ![]() He constantly uttered phrases like I am in charge, you do what I say. I hoped to love him like that but the way the author made him be in charge was off. Was the MC Lucien harsh and mean? At times he was. ![]() ![]() It's hard to say if it was dark considering everyone has their own definition of dark. ![]() It was well written, suspenseful enough and very steamy. I really hoped to like this book more than 3 stars. ![]()
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